Hi, Rwstock. I want to welcome you to Wikitravel and thank you for putting up some great information! I feel a little bad that I've had to edit out some of your links. I want to give you a brief reading list of pages that will help you to get used to the way things are done here.
First of all, there is the Manual of Style.
There's also the matter of tone.
You'll definitely want to look at Wikitravel:Listings and click links for further info on how different types of listings are structured here.
And finally, External links is an important page because Wikitravel's policy is to use them for official sites as part of listings but not to put them up instead of providing information that can just be easily printed out by people who may not have easy internet access while they're traveling.
Please feel free to post a reply (ending it by typing 4 tildes - the "~" key - in a row before pressing "Enter") here with any questions, or go to the Travellers' Pub, where others will be happy to welcome you here and work with you.
All the best,
Ikan Kekek 19:29, 26 November 2011 (EST)