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And nice work on cleaning up the US etc, It's needed a bit of deflating for some time now. We do allow (and prefer) lively / witty prose here though, contrary to wikipedia, so feel free to leave that in or add some of your own – cacahuate talk 21:46, 5 June 2008 (EDT)
Your suggestions on Talk pages
Your suggestions are pretty much spot on. Much of what you point out seems bizarre to me, almost as if someone read a book about the States and based their views on that. I suggest you just go ahead and rewrite the sections the way you think appropriate. Nice work! --Wandering 21:51, 5 June 2008 (EDT)