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There seams to be lots of misleading and oudated information about Nairobi,some of the information is biased and this article should be reviewed.
 
There seams to be lots of misleading and oudated information about Nairobi,some of the information is biased and this article should be reviewed.
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:[[Wikitravel:Plunge forward|DIY guide to improving articles]]. -- [[User:Sapphire|Sapphire]] • <small>([[User_talk:Sapphire|Talk]])</small> • 02:47, 6 May 2007 (EDT)
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== Minor Corrections ==
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I'd like to begin by commending the author for the comprehensive work done regarding the information about Nairobi.
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However, I noted some two errors, & I'd like to be as brief as possible.
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Under "See", you have written "Kenyatta Conference Centre", instead of Kenyatta Conference '''International Center'''
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Under "Buy" you have written "The '''three''' primary supermarkets in Nairobi are Tusky's, Uchumi, Naivas and Nakumatt." but you have listed '''four''' (4) supermarkets, Tusky's, Uchumi, Naivas and Nakumatt.
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Please check on these.
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Kind regards.
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== Heat & Sun ==
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fixed a typo and removed some irrelevant information regarding your heat tolerance depending on where you're from. If average temp is provided than the reader can make his or her own assumptions about what heat tolerance there is.

Latest revision as of 06:14, 8 October 2012

There seams to be lots of misleading and oudated information about Nairobi,some of the information is biased and this article should be reviewed.

DIY guide to improving articles. -- Sapphire(Talk) • 02:47, 6 May 2007 (EDT)

Minor Corrections[edit]

I'd like to begin by commending the author for the comprehensive work done regarding the information about Nairobi.

However, I noted some two errors, & I'd like to be as brief as possible.

Under "See", you have written "Kenyatta Conference Centre", instead of Kenyatta Conference International Center

Under "Buy" you have written "The three primary supermarkets in Nairobi are Tusky's, Uchumi, Naivas and Nakumatt." but you have listed four (4) supermarkets, Tusky's, Uchumi, Naivas and Nakumatt.

Please check on these.

Kind regards.

Heat & Sun[edit]

fixed a typo and removed some irrelevant information regarding your heat tolerance depending on where you're from. If average temp is provided than the reader can make his or her own assumptions about what heat tolerance there is.

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