Wikitravel:Words to avoid
From Wikitravel
These are some words to avoid in Wikitravel guides and listings.
- luxurious
- Empty, flowery language. Use a more concrete description instead: what part of the hotel/restaurant/etc. do you find luxurious? Are the curtains made of purple velvet? Is the ceiling painted with gilded murals?
- sumptuous
- See "luxurious".
- premiere
- Empty, flowery language. If a place or business is "first" in some sense, use that sense specifically. Otherwise, avoid this word.
- best
- Or any similar superlative. Unless you've actually tried all the others, this is a presumptuous comparison.
- recommended
- Recommended by whom? Wikitravel is too big to make recommendations. Simply add descriptive listings.
- suggested
- Suggested by whom? Wikitravel is too big to make recommendations. Simply add descriptive listings.
- it should be noted that...
- Go ahead and note it, then.
- travellers should remember that...
- Good thing we wrote it down in the guides, then.
- low(est) prices
- instead, provide the prices, or at least some examples of them
- tourist
- A negatively-weighted word in English. Very few English-speaking travellers identify themselves as tourists; almost all recreational travellers are.
- is located in
- This is a long way of saying "is in".
- is situated in
- See "is located in".
- unique / unique for (kind of travellers)
- state what exactly makes it unique
- ideal
- state what exactly makes it ideal
- perfect choice
- state what exactly makes it perfect choice
