Talk:Udaipur

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tarasnake 04:21, 7 January 2012 (EST)tarasnake No ides why extraordinary experience was deleted by a gardener from manhattan

My occupation is not at issue, nor is where I come from. As I said (more briefly) in my editing summary, you need to click this link and read it: Tour. However, I think External links#What not to link to is actually more relevant. Now, taking a third look (having discovered that most of the buttons on your site are currently non-functional, at least in my browser), I think the biggest problem is that your listing and your page are both confusing. If you can write a listing that actually describes, briefly but clearly, what the retreats consist of, it might be OK. However, if your site eventually becomes a portal, it will run afoul of the external links policy.

All the best,

Ikan Kekek 04:47, 7 January 2012 (EST)

thanks for the tips... i m still a garden walker in wiki tarasnake 07:43, 9 January 2012 (EST)tarasnake from the article i guess i should remove the booking aspect which is actually free or registration form in web site...