Talk:Harney County

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[edit] Naming

Should this article be named Harney or Harney County?

[edit] Mentoring advice from ADAGL241

Sorry this is so late. I, along witht the rest of the class, was not paying attenttion to the deadlines. So I hope this helps. Also, students get to evaluate how much they are worth so I hope you use it and give me full points. I think you had one of the most extensive pages in the class.This is Gabe and I almost did the same thing but you beat me to it. Good job-- I'm assuming this is Casey

There needs to be a bit of editiing in places like the Get Around section, EX: Most of Harney County is accessible by highway, although some of it requires a four wheel drive vehicle though. I understand it is the rough cut but these things can often slip past. This is mostly just little stuff anyway. It may help to clarfy the page if you list your links below the paragraphs with detailed descriptions of what they are. The Wiki travel page has the possibility of being accessed by people not as familiar with computers as the people in this class or even at this college. themore spelled out this stuff can be the better. The athletics section could use a little clarification. Not that it needs that much more info, just that it would be helpful to have a more clear title that is closer to the information that section holds. You only talk about a couple sports and a few years of school. Maybe you could call it highschool athletics. I myself would love to have a map or two showing me how to get to the places you describe in eat and drink. Specifics are always good. I hope you get the grade you are looking for and I hope this helps. Take it easy